Emails and Alligators

Scott from http://www.alligatorsinahelicopter.blogspot.com/ pointed out my email was not working, thanks for that Scott, and I appreciate the referral and signing me up to the 100 top viagra sites, will come in handy in my old age.

So,on the off chance someone has been trying to email me to see if I know Elle McPhersons phone number, you can try again. I don't have it, but you can now find out via email. Do you think I would really give her number away? She might now Angelina or Jessica Alba. ;-)

Scott had also written an entry on bad dialogue, ie characters talking to themselves. My little contribution to Warren's Group Project (at http://www.screenwritinglife.com/ )seemed to fit what he was saying perfectly. Unfortunately. ;-) I asked him, and he was kind enough to take it apart a bit and let me know his thoughts. So, if you want to see some constructive comments from a reputable reader, go and have a read at his site. I don't mind constructive criticism at all, if I am going to improve at writing, then getting feedback(and actually doing it) are the only ways.

cheers
Dave.